78. The following appeared in the editorial section of a monthly business newsmagazine.
“Most companies would agree that as the risk of physical injury occurring on the job increases, the wages paid to employees should also increase. Hence it makes financial sense for employers to make the workplace safer: they could thus reduce their payroll¹ expenses and save money.”
Discuss how well reasoned... etc.

In this editorial, the author argues that it makes financial sense for employers to make the workplace safer, in support of this claim the author reasons that since wages paid to employees should increase as the risk of physical injury increases, the converse² should be true as well. Hence, by decreasing the risk of injury, employers could decrease the wages paid to workers and thereby³ save money. This argument is unconvincing for two reasons.
To begin with the author assumes that because companies would agree that as risk of injury increases wages should also increase, they would also agree that as risk decreases wages should also decrease accordingly. This is tantamount to the assumption that risk of injury is the primary factor that determines workers’ wages. It is obvious that few employers, and even fewer employees, would agree that this is the case. To adopt this position one would have to disregard education, experience, and skill as equally important factors in determining the wages paid to workers.
Secondly⁴, the author’s reasoning suggests that the only benefit of a safer workplace is the savings⁵ employers could realize from lower wages. This is obviously not true. The costs associated with accidents on the job could far outweigh⁶ any savings that could be realized by paying workers lower wages.
In conclusion, the author’s argument is unconvincing. Risk of injury is an important factor to consider in determining the wages paid to workers but is not the only such factor. Furthermore, there are far better reasons for employers to make
 the workplace safer than the one presented by the author.

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