GMAT考试写作指导:Argument范文八二
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8.  Based upon a survey among workers that indicates a high level of interest in the
topics of corporate1 restructuring and redesign of benefits programs, the author
concludes that workers are not apathetic2 about management issues. Specifically, it is
argued that since 79 percent of the 1200 workers who responded to survey expressed
interest in these topics, the notion that workers are apathetic about management issues is
incorrect. The reasoning in this argument is problematic in several respects.
      First, the statistics cited in the editorial may be misleading because the total
number of workers employed by the corporation is not specified3. For example, if the
corporation employs 2000 workers, the fact that 79 percent of the nearly 1200
respondents showed interest in these topics provides strong support for the conclusion.
On the other hand, if the corporation employs 200,000 workers, the conclusion is much
weaker.
      Another problem with the argument is that the respondents' views are not
necessarily representative of the views of the work force in general. For example,
because the survey has to do with apathy4, it makes sense that only less apathetic workers
would respond to it, thereby5 distorting the overall picture of apathy among the work
force. Without knowing how the survey was conducted, it is impossible to assess
whether or not this is the case.
      A third problem with the argument is that it makes a hasty generalization6 about
the types of issues workers are interested in. It accords with common sense that workers
would be interested in corporate restructuring and redesign of benefits programs, since
these issues affect workers very directly. However, it is unfair to assume that workers
would be similarly interested in other management issues ones that do not affect them or
affect them less directly.
      In conclusion, this argument is not convincing as it stands. To strengthen it, the
author would have to show that the respondents account for a significant and
representative portion of all workers. Additionally, the author must provide evidence of
workers' interest other management topics not just those that affect workers directly


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1 corporate 7olzl     
adj.共同的,全体的;公司的,企业的
参考例句:
  • This is our corporate responsibility.这是我们共同的责任。
  • His corporate's life will be as short as a rabbit's tail.他的公司的寿命是兔子尾巴长不了。
2 apathetic 4M1y0     
adj.冷漠的,无动于衷的
参考例句:
  • I realised I was becoming increasingly depressed and apathetic.我意识到自己越来越消沉、越来越冷漠了。
  • You won't succeed if you are apathetic.要是你冷淡,你就不能成功。
3 specified ZhezwZ     
adj.特定的
参考例句:
  • The architect specified oak for the wood trim. 那位建筑师指定用橡木做木饰条。
  • It is generated by some specified means. 这是由某些未加说明的方法产生的。
4 apathy BMlyA     
n.漠不关心,无动于衷;冷淡
参考例句:
  • He was sunk in apathy after his failure.他失败后心恢意冷。
  • She heard the story with apathy.她听了这个故事无动于衷。
5 thereby Sokwv     
adv.因此,从而
参考例句:
  • I have never been to that city,,ereby I don't know much about it.我从未去过那座城市,因此对它不怎么熟悉。
  • He became a British citizen,thereby gaining the right to vote.他成了英国公民,因而得到了投票权。
6 generalization 6g4xv     
n.普遍性,一般性,概括
参考例句:
  • This sweeping generalization is the law of conservation of energy.这一透彻的概括就是能量守恒定律。
  • The evaluation of conduct involves some amount of generalization.对操行的评价会含有一些泛泛之论。
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