雅思小作文笔记整理
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(单词翻译:双击或拖选)

趋势描述(上升,下降)

上升的动词:increase, rise, surge, enlarge, swell1, soar, enhance, climb, jump, augment2, go up

下降的动词:decrease, descend3, decline, drop, shrink, [wv]diminish[/vw], dwindle4, taper5

形容动词的副词:considerably, sharply, remarkably7, dramatically, greatly, drastically, extremely, steadily8, substantially, continually, continuously, moderately, respectively, generally, slightly, mainly, strikingly

例子文章:

Stock prices have been extremely volatile9. They climbed steadily in the 1950’s, reached a peak in 1966, and then fluctuated up and down until 1973, when they fell sharply. Stock prices had recovered substantially by the early 1980s when a major stock market boom again, sending to Dow Jones Industry Average (DJIA) to a peak of 2722 on August 25,1987. After a 17% decline over the next month and a half, the stock market experienced the worst one-day drop in its entirehistory on “Black Monday”, October 19, 1987, when the DJIA fell by more than 500 points, a 22% decline.

句型的变化:

1. 主体做主语+increase

Between 1940 and 1985 the proportion of the elderly people increased remarkably from about 17% in Sweden and 9% in the USA to 13% and 15% respectively.

2. 年代做主语+saw + increase

The period from 1940 to 1985 saw a generally steadyincrease in the proportion of …

3.地点做主语+experienced +increase

Both the USA and Sweden experienced an alarming/moderately surge/increase in the proportion of…

写作时首段应是命题的改写

主体段应描写大的特征或大趋势的概括(关键数据支持)

关键数据即起点终点坐标,最大最小值,偶尔会用交点坐标,部分特征拐点坐标。

得分注意点:

1. 句子的衔接和句子结构的变化

2. 分词和比较结构的使用

3. 从句的使用

4. 整篇文章万万不可主观推理分析,否则扣分

首段是信息段,不能照抄命题,只能改写命题,概括主要的研究内容,研究对象,时间和地点。如果是两个图,必须分开来写,句型常用while...shows…,…illustrate … (剑五P52,剑四P100剑四P54)

For example:

(首段)The three lines in the chart each show the changes in the proportion of the elderly people to the population of the USA, Sweden and Japan from 1940 till today. Also the chart gives predicted date for the trends.

(主体段)Since 1940, the proportion in the USA has been slightly higher than that in Sweden at any given time, while that in Japan was always the smallest. Specially10, the figures for the three countries in 1940 were 9%, 7%, 5% respectively. The changes in the proportion in the USA and Sweden are featured mainly by steady increase although since 1980 the USA experienced somewhatdeclines. By contrast, Japan did not see increase substantially, sending it to a peak of 5% in 2007, the same as in 1940. According to the predictionsince 2000, the upward trends will have been obvious in the three countries, but in Japan will soar at the fastest speed. Till/By 2040 the figure will have reached 27%, compared with25% in the USA and 23% in Sweden.

另一篇文章,主要展示最值的表达

In the term of the length of the Underground Railway System (URS), that in London ranks first among the six in that it reaches 394km, almost 36 times longer than that in Kyoto, the shortest. The second longest is in Paris (199km).

Focusing on the open date, we see that once again London URS was strikinglyearlier than all other counterparts. Put it accurately11, London opened the URS as early as in1863, 37 years earlier than that in Paris. By contrast, the youngest is LA who did not start to run URS until 2001.

说明文注重语言的流畅,简洁。在图表作文中,不追求词藻的华丽,只追求表达的清楚。

注意点:1.没有必要写出每条信息,要辨别关键特征

2.段落划分要合理(得分点)

3.衔接和过渡词很重要

一整篇文章的例子:剑五P75

To be located in the town centre,S2 is in the town centre, a non-traffic zone. As result, it is only accessibleby the railway whereas the main roads are unavailable. Moreover, it is hemmed12 out the houses, meaning it’s convenient for the dwellers13 to do some shopping. In addition, it is closer to the south industry but far away from the north.

Unlike S2, S1 will be set in the countryside, where both the railway and main roads are ready. But the 44000 people from Bransdon and Crandson find it not easy to reach S1, although it is connected by the railway with Crandson. Furthermore, this site is far away from the two industry areas. However, it is convenient for those who live in Hindo.

To sum up, the two sites are different in many aspects/ways.

小结:柱状图可变成线性图

饼状图可变成表格图(表格题中,在对象的旁边标识出上升,下降,或有变化的箭头,之后,将同类上升的写一段,下降的写一段,不稳定的单列一段)

流程示意图及步骤图(使用总分结构,着重对比和过程的描述,关键词firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally, to begin with, and then, further more…)

 



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1 swell IHnzB     
vi.膨胀,肿胀;增长,增强
参考例句:
  • The waves had taken on a deep swell.海浪汹涌。
  • His injured wrist began to swell.他那受伤的手腕开始肿了。
2 augment Uuozw     
vt.(使)增大,增加,增长,扩张
参考例句:
  • They hit upon another idea to augment their income.他们又想出一个增加收入的办法。
  • The government's first concern was to augment the army and auxiliary forces.政府首先关心的是增强军队和辅助的力量。
3 descend descend     
vt./vi.传下来,下来,下降
参考例句:
  • I hope the grace of God would descend on me.我期望上帝的恩惠。
  • We're not going to descend to such methods.我们不会沦落到使用这种手段。
4 dwindle skxzI     
v.逐渐变小(或减少)
参考例句:
  • The factory's workforce has dwindled from over 4,000 to a few hundred.工厂雇员总数已经从4,000多人减少到几百人。
  • He is struggling to come to terms with his dwindling authority.他正努力适应自己权力被削弱这一局面。
5 taper 3IVzm     
n.小蜡烛,尖细,渐弱;adj.尖细的;v.逐渐变小
参考例句:
  • You'd better taper off the amount of time given to rest.你最好逐渐地减少休息时间。
  • Pulmonary arteries taper towards periphery.肺动脉向周围逐渐变细。
6 considerably 0YWyQ     
adv.极大地;相当大地;在很大程度上
参考例句:
  • The economic situation has changed considerably.经济形势已发生了相当大的变化。
  • The gap has narrowed considerably.分歧大大缩小了。
7 remarkably EkPzTW     
ad.不同寻常地,相当地
参考例句:
  • I thought she was remarkably restrained in the circumstances. 我认为她在那种情况下非常克制。
  • He made a remarkably swift recovery. 他康复得相当快。
8 steadily Qukw6     
adv.稳定地;不变地;持续地
参考例句:
  • The scope of man's use of natural resources will steadily grow.人类利用自然资源的广度将日益扩大。
  • Our educational reform was steadily led onto the correct path.我们的教学改革慢慢上轨道了。
9 volatile tLQzQ     
adj.反复无常的,挥发性的,稍纵即逝的,脾气火爆的;n.挥发性物质
参考例句:
  • With the markets being so volatile,investments are at great risk.由于市场那么变化不定,投资冒着很大的风险。
  • His character was weak and volatile.他这个人意志薄弱,喜怒无常。
10 specially Hviwq     
adv.特定地;特殊地;明确地
参考例句:
  • They are specially packaged so that they stack easily.它们经过特别包装以便于堆放。
  • The machine was designed specially for demolishing old buildings.这种机器是专为拆毁旧楼房而设计的。
11 accurately oJHyf     
adv.准确地,精确地
参考例句:
  • It is hard to hit the ball accurately.准确地击中球很难。
  • Now scientists can forecast the weather accurately.现在科学家们能准确地预报天气。
12 hemmed 16d335eff409da16d63987f05fc78f5a     
缝…的褶边( hem的过去式和过去分词 ); 包围
参考例句:
  • He hemmed and hawed but wouldn't say anything definite. 他总是哼儿哈儿的,就是不说句痛快话。
  • The soldiers were hemmed in on all sides. 士兵们被四面包围了。
13 dwellers e3f4717dcbd471afe8dae6a3121a3602     
n.居民,居住者( dweller的名词复数 )
参考例句:
  • City dwellers think country folk have provincial attitudes. 城里人以为乡下人思想迂腐。 来自《简明英汉词典》
  • They have transformed themselves into permanent city dwellers. 他们已成为永久的城市居民。 来自《简明英汉词典》
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