范文:我的同学My Classmate
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 请以“My Classmate”为标题写一篇记叙文
  要求:1、主题明确,语言流畅,思路清晰。 2、字数在100字以内。

  思路点拨:

  写记叙文要按照事物发展的客观规律叙述,所叙述的内容要交代清楚,条理清晰,重点突出,主次分明,详略得当。

  这篇文章也是记叙文,主人公应该用第三人称,时态以一般过去时为主。本文以主人公为中心线索,以一、两件事件为重点内容去组织材料,反映主人公的形象特征。整个内容情节要合情合理,有真实感,叙述时可按事情发展的顺序进行,同时加以点评。

 

  参考范文

My Classmate

  Liu Kai is my classmate. He is a good student and always ready to help others1.

  One day on his way to school,he saw2 a little girl crossing the road. A car was3 coming towards4 her quickly and the girl was too frightened5 to move. The car nearly6 hit her. Just then LiuKai rushed7 up to her and caught her by the arm. The little girl was saved8. She told him where she lived,and he took9 her home. When LiuKai hurried into the classroom,the teacher had10 already11 begun his lesson. He told the teacher why he was late. He was then praised12 for what he had done.




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1 others mmczaZ     
prep.(pl.)另外的人
参考例句:
  • Learning from others is important.向别人学习很重要。
  • She is always ready to help others.她总是乐于助人。
2 saw ts3yA     
vbl.看见(see的过去式);n.锯;v.用锯子锯
参考例句:
  • Would you like to saw a tree for me?你能为我锯棵树吗?
  • The moment I saw you,I knew you were angry with me.我一看到你,就知道你在生我的气。
3 was bglwv     
v.(is,am的过去式)是,在
参考例句:
  • He said he was right.他说他是正确的。
  • He was cold and hungry.他又冷又饿。
4 towards AnSwe     
prep.朝,向,致力于,有助于,对于;大约,将近
参考例句:
  • The house will be ready towards the end of the year.这房子在年底以前可以造好。
  • He is friendly towards me.他对我友好。
5 frightened 8sfz8Y     
adj.受惊的,受恐吓的
参考例句:
  • I was frightened of him when I saw him first.我第一次见他时怕他。
  • You frightened me to death,staying out all night!你整夜不回家,把我急死了!
6 nearly 5Gtxq     
adv.将近,几乎,差不多
参考例句:
  • I nearly missed the bus.我险些错过了公交车。
  • It is nearly two years since I came here.我来这儿快两年了。
7 rushed f7ac5b8168a9ab5a7cad2471ad28fcc9     
adj.匆忙的,贸然的v.(使)急速行进,仓促完成( rush的过去式和过去分词 );突袭;(使)仓促行事;催促
参考例句:
  • She rushed downstairs and burst into the kitchen. 她冲下楼闯进厨房。
  • This solution is a fudge rushed in to win cheers at the party conference. 这个解决方案是为了赢得党的会议的赞誉而仓促搞出来的表面文章。
8 saved 536a056b710e94b16169efd17a4a657b     
v.拯救( save的过去式和过去分词 );收集;保留;避免
参考例句:
  • They scrimped and saved to give the children a good education. 他们省吃俭用,为的是攒钱让孩子受到良好的教育。
  • She had saved a few titbits for her cat. 她给猫留了点好吃的东西。
9 took indwq     
vt.带,载(take的过去式)
参考例句:
  • I took my dog for a walk along the river.我带着狗沿那条河散步。
  • It took me about two hours to cook the meat.我花了大约两个小时来煮这些肉。
10 had FeBxb     
vbl.have的过去式和过去分词;conj.有
参考例句:
  • I just had a good idea!我有个好主意!
  • The boy had a small branch of a tree in his hand.这个男孩手上拿一条小树枝。
11 already wLByk     
adv.已经
参考例句:
  • We have eaten already.我们已经吃过了。
  • I've been there already,so I don't want to go again.我早已去过那里了,所以我不想再去了。
12 praised 3af965b2d387fae9b42c2299ada249a1     
v.称赞( praise的过去式和过去分词 );赞美;颂扬;崇拜
参考例句:
  • He was magnanimous in defeat and praised his opponent's skill. 他对失败表现得很洒脱,并且赞扬了对手的才能。
  • He was praised for his neat and careful work. 他因工作认真、利索而受到赞扬。 来自《简明英汉词典》
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