写作训练范文讲评:周末
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  「要求」
  周末两天的休息对于平时忙于工作学习的人们来说是非常宝贵的。请你根据下列提纲写一篇短文。

  周末对于人们来说意味着什么。

  每个人都有自己度周末的方式。

  我是怎样度周末的。

  「范文」

  Weekends

  Weekends to people mean that they can have a two-day good rest. For example, people can go out to enjoy themselves or get together with relatives and friends to talk with each other or watch interesting video tapes with the whole family.

  Everyone spends weekends in his own way. Within two days, some people can relax themselves by listening to music, reading novels, or watching films. Others perhaps are more active by playing basketball, wimming or dancing. Different people have different relaxations1.

  I often spend weekends with my family or my friends. Sometimes my parents take me on a visit to their old friends. Sometimes I go to the library to study or borrow some books to gain much knowledge. I also go to see various exhibition to broaden2 my vision3. An excursion4 to seashore or mountain resorts5 is my favorite way of spending weekends. Weekends are always enjoyable for me.

  「评语」 

 全文思路清晰,论述充分,语言流畅易懂。用词讲究,注意了词语搭配,没有重复、堆砌之感。



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1 relaxations c59ae756fd871d10e740823170279785     
n.消遣( relaxation的名词复数 );松懈;松弛;放松
参考例句:
  • Playing the piano is one of his favourite relaxations. 弹钢琴是他喜爱的一种消遣。 来自互联网
  • Playing the paino is one of his favourite relaxations. 弹钢琴是他最喜爱的消遣之一。 来自互联网
2 broaden 9Sxyj     
v.放宽,变宽,扩大
参考例句:
  • We broaden in experiences by traveling.旅行增长我们的经验。
  • Let's broaden out the discussion to talk about education as a whole.我们来扩大一下讨论范围,全面谈谈教育问题。
3 vision yhLwc     
n.视觉,先见之明,光景,视力,眼力,幻想,影像;vt.幻想
参考例句:
  • The wall cuts across our line of vision.那面墙挡住了我们的视线。
  • Much reading has impaired his vision.大量读书损害了他的视力。
4 excursion Xh6zu     
n.远足,短途旅行
参考例句:
  • I have arranged with my classmates for an excursion to the beach.我已经跟同学们商量好去海滩远足的事。
  • Our class will make an excursion to the seaside.我们班将去海边旅行。
5 resorts a6c7ef8d98b4286ffeeaad012cd3dfcb     
n.求助,凭借,诉诸( resort的名词复数 );求助[凭借]的对象;采用的办法;度假胜地v.求助于或诉诸某事物,采取某手段或方法应急或作为对策( resort的第三人称单数 )
参考例句:
  • Ferry boats ply regularly between all the resorts on the lake. 渡船定时往返于湖的各旅游景点。 来自《简明英汉词典》
  • Other resorts could benefit from the spillover of tourists. 其他度假胜地可以从游客带来的影响中间受益。 来自《简明英汉词典》
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