初中写作指导:英语习作点评
文章来源: 文章作者: 发布时间:2007-07-25 08:23 字体: [ ]  进入论坛
(单词翻译:双击或拖选)

  习作要求
  不少同学都对英语阅读感到很头疼,为此你决定写一篇关于“怎样改进英语阅读”的英语短文,以期对他们有所帮助。提示如下:

  1. 不要什么书都读,要挑选一些重要的或感兴趣的书读;

  2. 从简易的读物开始,不要一开头就读难懂的读物;

  3. 不要读得太慢,不要一碰到生词就查词典;

  4. 在迅速读完一个章节,对全文有一个大致了解后,再回过来慢慢读,这时可以查一些必须查的词;

  5. 要坚持下去,才能成功。

  注意:题目自拟,字数 100~120 .

  [学生习作]

How to Improve1 Your English Reading3

  Improve ① your English reading, you should, first of all, choose something you feel important4 or interesting to read. Don't try to read anything ② . You should begin ③ those written in simple5 English. Don't read those which prove2 difficult for you at the very beginning6.

  While7 reading, don't read too slowly8 or look up dictionary9 for ④ every new word you meet with. After reading a passage10 and having its main11 idea in your ⑤ mind12, you may turn back and read it again. This time you read it slowly and look up some new words if necessary13.

  Keep on reading in this way and you'll surely14 make progresses16 ⑥ little by little.

  [习作评析]

  本文能按照要求写出要点,语言流畅,格式规范。当然其中的一些小错误也应当尽量避免:① Improve 应改为 To improve .此处应是动词不定式做目的状语。② anything 应改为 everything .不定代词的误用。此句所表达的意思是“不要试图什么书都读”。③此处加 with ,表示“以 / 从……开始”应用 begin with .④去掉此处的 dictionary for . 这里短语 look up 表示“查阅字典等”意思,后面直接跟查的内容。⑤去掉此处的 your .表示“记住某事”用短语 keep/have … in mind, mind 前不需要限定词。⑥ progresses 改为 progress15 . progress 是抽象名词,不能用复数形式。

  [改后作文]

How to Improve Your English Reading

  To improve your English reading, you should, first of all, choose something you feel important or interesting to read. Don't try to read everything. You should begin with those written in simple English. Don't read those which prove difficult for you at the very beginning.

  While reading, don't read too slowly or look up every new word you meet with. After reading a passage and having its main idea in mind, you may turn back and read it again. This time you read it slowly and look up some new words if necessary.

  Keep on reading in this way and you'll surely make progress little by little.




点击收听单词发音收听单词发音  

1 improve y9Bxg     
v.改良,改善,增进,提高
参考例句:
  • You need to improve your diet.你应该改善你的饮食。
  • I hope the weather will improve.我希望天气会变好。
2 prove rR1xK     
v.证明,证实,表现出,结果是
参考例句:
  • This will prove to the world that we are right.这将向全世界证明我们是对的。
  • How can you prove that you are right?你如何能证明你是正确的呢?
3 reading YiGyU     
n.阅读,知识,读物,表演,对法律条文的解释;adj.阅读的
参考例句:
  • Children learn reading and writing at school.孩子们在学校学习阅读和写作。
  • He finds pleasure in reading.他从阅读中得到乐趣。
4 important wcIzI     
adj.重要的;重大的;严重的
参考例句:
  • It's important to find out what he is doing.弄清他在干什么是重要的。
  • This is a very important problem.这个问题很重要。
5 simple AyMwQ     
adj.简单的,易懂的,单纯的,纯朴的
参考例句:
  • He wrote a story in simple English.他用简单的英语写了一则故事。
  • He was as simple as a child.他像孩子一样天真。
6 beginning 2NFzJ     
n.开始的部分;起点
参考例句:
  • This is only the beginning.这仅仅是开始。
  • Children should form good habits from the very beginning.孩子们从一开始就应养成良好的习惯。
7 while IeZz7W     
conj.当…的时候;而;虽然;尽管 n.一会儿
参考例句:
  • In a short while,the cat ate up the fish.不久,那只猫便将鱼吃个精光。
  • He teaches English in the school all the while.他一直在这所学校里教英语。
8 slowly Qx4wE     
adv.慢地,缓慢地
参考例句:
  • Speak more slowly,please.请说慢一点。
  • Do it slowly and carefully.要慢慢仔细地做。
9 dictionary OvvxO     
n.词典,字典,辞典
参考例句:
  • I have a new dictionary.我有一本新字典。
  • This is a very good dictionary.这是一本非常好的词典。
10 passage gLnxf     
n.通道,走廊,一段文章,旅程;vi.通过;vt.通过
参考例句:
  • I'll read you another passage.我来读另一段给你们听。
  • The house has an underground passage.这房子有一条地下通道。
11 main wAWxH     
adj.主要的;重要的
参考例句:
  • The building is the main object of his interest.他最感兴趣的是这栋建筑物。
  • This is the main purpose of my coming here.这就是我到这儿来的主要目的。
12 mind DDjxa     
n.思想,主意,心意;v.介意,照顾,留心
参考例句:
  • I've changed my mind.我一经转变主意。
  • You really don't mind?你真的不介意?
13 necessary UGJxo     
adj.必需的,必要的;n.(pl.)必需品
参考例句:
  • If necessary,give me a ring.如果需要,打个电话给我。
  • Sleep is necessary to health.睡眠对健康是必要的。
14 surely yrRwj     
adv.确实地,无疑地;必定地,一定地
参考例句:
  • It'should surely be possible for them to reach an agreement.想必他们可以达成协议。
  • Surely we'll profit from your work.我们肯定会从你的工作中得到益处。
15 progress xRsxx     
n.进步,发展,前进;v.促进,进步,进行
参考例句:
  • Study well and make progress every day.好好学习,天天向上。
  • He is very pleased with the progress we are making.他对我们工作的进展很满意。
16 progresses afd3553ea329b3f9fd29aeb1bd98e401     
n.进步( progress的名词复数 );前进;[生物学]进化;(向更高方向)增长v.(使)进步, (使)进行( progress的第三人称单数 );改进;进展;(时间上)推移
参考例句:
  • Most operations are successful and the patient progresses smoothly to complete convalescence and rehabilitation. 大多数手术是成功的,病人逐渐平稳地完全康复和复原。 来自辞典例句
  • As the disease progresses, blood clots may develop and plug up the artery, blocking circulation completely. 病情发展就会形成血块,将动脉堵住,使循环完全断绝。 来自辞典例句
TAG标签:
发表评论
请自觉遵守互联网相关的政策法规,严禁发布色情、暴力、反动的言论。
评价:
表情:
验证码:点击我更换图片