Part Ⅳ Error Correction (15 minutes)

The place of the child in society has varied¹ for thousands of years
and has been effected by different cultures and religions. In ancient --71--
times unwanted children were occasionally abandoned, put to death,
exploiting or offered for religious sacrifices, and in any event a --72--
large percentage of them didn’t survive their physically² hazardous
existence to reach to maturity³.--73--

In western civilization within the last , there
have been many changes in attitude with the young. In agricultural --74--
Europe, and later with the beginning of the Industrial Revolution,
the children of the poor work long hours for little or no pay, and --75--
there was no public concern on their safety or welfare punishment --76--
could be brutal⁴ and severe.

By the eighteenth century the harsh and severe methods began to
show any change. Society slowly accorded(给予) children a role of --77--
importance. Books were written expressly for them and gradually
laws were passing for their protection. Efforts were made to create --78--
for them a life better than their parents!

In the past few decades parents have become more and more attentive⁵
for the needs of their children.Better health care is available and --79--
education is no longer reserving for the children from wealthy families. --80--

内容概要:几千年来，孩子在社会的地位不尽相同，这主要是受不同文化和宗教的影响。在古代，不想要的孩子有时被抛弃，被处死，被剥削，甚至被用作宗教祭品。在近几百年来，在西方对孩子态度有了很大的改变，但孩子们经常长时间工作而得到很少或几乎没有报酬。直到最近，才有法律保护未成年人，使得他们有接受医疗和教育的机会。
71.【答案】effected→affected【试题分析】词性错误。【详细解答】effect 是名词，影响，而此处需要动词，因此改作affect v.
72.【答案】exploiting→exploited【试题分析】语态错误。【详细解答】此处需要被动语态，因为孩子们是被剥削。
73.【答案】to→ to【试题分析】及物动词用法错误。【详细解答】reach 是及物动词，后应接宾语，而不需要介词。
74.【答案】with→toward【试题分析】介词搭配错误。【详细解答】attitude 后接介词toward。
75.【答案】work→worked【试题分析】时态错误。【详细解答】此处应用一般过去时才符合全篇的安排。
76.【答案】on→for【试题分析】介词搭配错误。【详细解答】concern 后接for 表示“对…表示关注”
77.【答案】any→some【试题分析】词语用法错误。【详细解答】any只用于疑问句和否定句，而some 一般用于肯定句。
78.【答案】passing→passed【试题分析】语态错误。【详细解答】此处需要被动语态，而不是主动语态。
79.【答案】for→to【试题分析】介词固定搭配。【详细解答】attentive 后接介词to。
80.【答案】reserving→reserved【试题分析】语态错误。【详细解答】此处需要被动语态。