In sum, aside from certain academic areas in which outside work is either unavailable or unnecessary, students and faculty¹ alike stand everything to gain when faculty enrich their careers by interspersing² field work with academic work.

　　小结：作者总的来说是大部分同意原文观点的。但是我觉得他在第一段的异议方面有所欠缺。没有深入发挥下去。剩下的论证都是只能算说理清晰，谈不上上上乘，但也不错啦。主要看来还是举例救了他啊。

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