Although it is a freedom to use tobacco while some people think it should be made illegal as the same way as other drugs. To what extent do you agree or disagree？ What’s your opinion?

(Sample 1)
It is an undeniable fact that using tobacco will be harmful to your health. Especially is an effective method to suicide for that group of addictive¹ people. But I think it is not equal to other illegal drugs which should be forbidden although it has so many drawbacks.

A colorless, poisonous alkaloid endanger lung and respiratory, derived² from the tobacco plant and used as an insecticide，NICOTINE is the substance in tobacco to which smokers³ can become addicted⁴, difficulty explaining the strange effect make people calm down. It is considered a good method to relax nerves in this society. All of the severe pressures like fierce competition, unemployment threat, and extravagant⁵ expenses almost make everyone collapsed⁶ from exhaustion⁷. Like cats on the hot bricks, these poor human seek various methods to release themselves.  It seems like a good way to indulged themselves with drinking and smoking，dippy with a confusedly condition. Few people stand in a firm position criticize its negative way because smoking would not make people lose mind and go to a dead lane, or disturb social system. .

Different with cigarette, drugs not only lead to death, but also is a severe social problem needs to solve. In order to get a sudden huge profit, the mafia imposed on the druggy that need this narcotic⁸ extremely, to do illegal bargaining by any kinds of means. Selling drugs, murder, all of these would disturbance⁹ of the peace by criminal force from many countries, like Italian. Not only is this, the worst thing countless¹⁰ families destroyed, sadness and darkness around them. And that brings on instability and chaos¹¹ to the society directly.

All in all, the essential measurement is government should investment fund and labor¹² force to reinforce legal system construction and social management. Impose penalty and improve social awareness¹³ and consciousness are the necessary condition. As for the private thing like smoking, we can do nothing except propaganda and education. 

(Sample 2)
Medically, tobacco has been told distinguishingly from drugs. Nevertheless, there has been an on-going argument about whether or not tobacco should be made illegal as drugs. After close inspection¹⁴, I would like to support the legalization of tobacco for the following reasons.

The main reason is that tobacco is an absolutely different concept from drugs in terms of the toxicity¹⁵. Drugs, such as heroin¹⁶, can drive people who take it insane and out of mind. And the damage is both mental and physical. In contrast, despite all those tobacco-related diseased, tobacco do far less harm to people than drugs do. What’s more, in our daily life, many other things are doing potential damage to people. For instance, chemical detergent¹⁷ polluted the underground water and vegetable, causing the toxin¹⁸ accumulating in our body. Therefore, judging only by the number of diseases tobacco will bring won’t be a reasonable method; we can’t equate¹⁹ tobacco with drugs.

In the second place, smoking has been part of life of many people. Most male smokers admit that they will get refreshed after taking a cigarette, especially when a hard work is just over. Some old people smoke just for relaxation²⁰ and killing²¹ the time. Lao She, a famous Chinese litterateur, said that he wouldn’t have got inspiration until smoking a cigarette. And, surprisingly, he has lived a long life of 92 years! It’s evident that the saying: smoking will shorten people’s life is unnecessarily true.