写作范文:比较长期供职同一单位和频换工作的优缺点
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雅思较少有这种对比两方面好坏的题型,一般要求你就一种事情说出其好坏或两种观点让你选择其一。不管真正题目如何,观点都没有区别。如果真正题目和大家的回忆有所不同,我将重新修正。
          ----广州仲恺雅思培训中心专职写作老师赖劲松。

Version 114 Some people prefer to stay in the same job for the same company, but others prefer to change jobs frequently. You should use specific reasons to compare the advantages and disadvantages of both sides.

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Introduction( 20 words)
Nowadays very few people intend to go in for a life-time career. Still there
are some advantages to doing so.

Body1( 99 words)
Merits of always taking a position can be examined by three aspects.(topic sentences) First, if you stick at taking a post, all angles of the job will have appeared; after
some time,you will definitely have a good command of it. Consequently you may become
a veteran of the field and earn respect or prestige from others. Second, you can
establish an extensive social connections relating to the field, helping1 you tear down
most of the barriers standing2 in the way of your working endeavor. Finally, mistakes
of the routine tasks would be minimized because you have learned the lessons.

Body2 (111 words)
On the other hand, I would like to illustrate3 the advantages of experiencing different
jobs. (topic sentence) Initially4, we look at the issue of bribery5. Many high-level staff
are inclined to accept bribes6 via power in hand. However, if he knows that someone else
will soon take his place, such acts can be avoided. We then look at work motivation.
If one works for the same company for a long time without promotion7, he may get sick and
tired of doing the same daily routine. Nonetheless, a manager should have qualities of a
sense of teamwork and the capability8 of coordination9. Therefore, to try various positions
can help you gain ground to be promoted. 

Conclusion ( 67 words)
In summary, staying in the same post can cultivate one to cut out for the job but involve
one in a boring career while changing jobs frequently can be both advantageous10 by keeping
bribery away and providing one with more opportunities of promotion and disadvantageous by
making mistakes occasionally. In my opinion, people should seek a decent and good-paid job and pay little attention to changing it.



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1 helping 2rGzDc     
n.食物的一份&adj.帮助人的,辅助的
参考例句:
  • The poor children regularly pony up for a second helping of my hamburger. 那些可怜的孩子们总是要求我把我的汉堡包再给他们一份。
  • By doing this, they may at times be helping to restore competition. 这样一来, 他在某些时候,有助于竞争的加强。
2 standing 2hCzgo     
n.持续,地位;adj.永久的,不动的,直立的,不流动的
参考例句:
  • After the earthquake only a few houses were left standing.地震过后只有几幢房屋还立着。
  • They're standing out against any change in the law.他们坚决反对对法律做任何修改。
3 illustrate IaRxw     
v.举例说明,阐明;图解,加插图
参考例句:
  • The company's bank statements illustrate its success.这家公司的银行报表说明了它的成功。
  • This diagram will illustrate what I mean.这个图表可说明我的意思。
4 initially 273xZ     
adv.最初,开始
参考例句:
  • The ban was initially opposed by the US.这一禁令首先遭到美国的反对。
  • Feathers initially developed from insect scales.羽毛最初由昆虫的翅瓣演化而来。
5 bribery Lxdz7Z     
n.贿络行为,行贿,受贿
参考例句:
  • FBI found out that the senator committed bribery.美国联邦调查局查明这个参议员有受贿行为。
  • He was charged with bribery.他被指控受贿。
6 bribes f3132f875c572eefabf4271b3ea7b2ca     
n.贿赂( bribe的名词复数 );向(某人)行贿,贿赂v.贿赂( bribe的第三人称单数 );向(某人)行贿,贿赂
参考例句:
  • It was alleged that he had taken bribes while in office. 他被指称在任时收受贿赂。
  • corrupt officials accepting bribes 接受贿赂的贪官污吏
7 promotion eRLxn     
n.提升,晋级;促销,宣传
参考例句:
  • The teacher conferred with the principal about Dick's promotion.教师与校长商谈了迪克的升级问题。
  • The clerk was given a promotion and an increase in salary.那个职员升了级,加了薪。
8 capability JsGzZ     
n.能力;才能;(pl)可发展的能力或特性等
参考例句:
  • She has the capability to become a very fine actress.她有潜力成为杰出演员。
  • Organizing a whole department is beyond his capability.组织整个部门是他能力以外的事。
9 coordination Ho8zt     
n.协调,协作
参考例句:
  • Gymnastics is a sport that requires a considerable level of coordination.体操是一项需要高协调性的运动。
  • The perfect coordination of the dancers and singers added a rhythmic charm to the performance.舞蹈演员和歌手们配合得很好,使演出更具魅力。
10 advantageous BK5yp     
adj.有利的;有帮助的
参考例句:
  • Injections of vitamin C are obviously advantageous.注射维生素C显然是有利的。
  • You're in a very advantageous position.你处于非常有利的地位。
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