• 不要总以有生命的名词和人称代词开头（受汉语表达习惯的影响, to use I, People and We, 开头）；

• 不要千篇一律的使用主动语态；

• 不要总是用（如果）（因为）（当）等口语意味较重的句子，要注意使用书面语体的句子；

• 不要对动词过分依赖，要学会用动词名词化来表达；

• 不用总是用肯定句来表达，要学会用否定句子表达肯定的意思；

• 恰当的使用排比句和平行句

• Many people think birth control is quite necessary in China.

• We are making great efforts¹ to improve our English.

• If you compare bicycles with cars carefully, you will find bicycles are superior² to cars.

• If we only apply³ book knowledge, we will not get good results.

• The style. of living has become more and more popular and accepted by more and more young people.

• Every young boy and girl wants to earn a little money to help cover higher college cost.

• Whenever you pick up a newspaper, you will always find advertisement