新东方专家指点轻松打造PETS作文论说文模板(四)
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(四)分析列举式

  具体表述如下:

  人们喜欢参观博物馆,分析一下都有什么原因? 你认为一个好邻居应该有哪些品质?有人搬到你们城市,你认为他会对这个城市有些什么看法?

  两种模板:

  1._________的确是一个值得探讨的话题。不同的人有不同的看法,有的认为______,有的认为____________,还有的认为____________我认为最重要的一点是____________.

  第一段:

  There is no denying the fact that (why/how/what) ____________ is a hot topic which is much talked about [not only by ____________, but also by ____________ /by people across the world/ in a modern society].

  或:There is no denying the fact that (why/how/what) ____________ is a popular topic which has caused heated debate over a long period of time (because it affects everybody in his or her daily lives).

  或:There is no denying the fact that (why/how/what) ____________ is a basic (moral/philosophical) problem that can not be circumvented1 by anybody,( because the opinion on this problem will determine one’s attitude toward the world and the life).

  或:(如果是针对某一事件的题目,不是什么popular topic)____________(Why people visit museums) is a interesting question that deserves careful investigation2 not only by_______________(museum managers), but also by ____________(visitors themselves). People with different experience, life style and [emotional concerns / educational background/____________] differ greatly in their attitudes toward this [problem /question]. Some people hold the opinion that ____________. Others, [however/on the contrary], maintain that ____________. Still others, convinced by the view that ____________, argue that ____________. According to them,____________. But as far as I am concerned, I consider the [chief reason/ most important quality] is ____________. And here are three reasons that I’d like to point out.

  第二段:第一点第二点第三点

  第三段:

  In a word, ____________(the three points mentioned above) are the main opinions on ____________ hold by [common/most] people. But my idea is that ____________________, and I sincerely believe that it is right.

  2.____________的确是一个值得探讨的话题。人们看法比较一致,第一第二第三。我认为最重要的一点是____________

  第一段:

  第一句同1。第二句:

  Somewhat surprisingly, people with different experience, life style and [emotional concerns / educational background/____________] share similar attitudes toward this [problem/question]. They usually [give some, even all of the following reasons / consider some, even all of the following points [important/ necessary / desirable /advisable] ].

  第二段:

  第一点第二点第三点

  第三段:In a word, ____________(the three points mentioned above) are the main [reasons /desirable qualities /____________] of ____________. But as far as I am concerned, I consider the [ chief reason/ most important quality] is ____________.

  或:In a word, ____________(the three points mentioned above) are the main opinions on ____________ hold by [common/most] people. But in my point of view, ____________ has more advantages than disadvantages under most circumstances.

  通用句型:(并不固定在某个模板中,在每个模板中都可以用到)

  This may explain why ____________/As a consequence____________

  It goes without saying that____________

  In fact, we can observe easily that in modern society,____________

  As a proverb says, "Everything has two sides".

  As a proverb says, "Where there is a will there is a way".

  As is known to all, "No pains, no gains."

  Let’s bring our discussion here to a more present and practical context. In today’s world,____________

  I can say that if you have no experiences like these, your life is an inadequate3 one.

  be of great benefit/damage to sb./sth.

  The reason of ____________ is not so much ____________ as ____________

  People differ greatly in their attitudes towards this problem. Some people hold the opinion that ____________ Others, [ however/on the contrary], maintain that ____________.

It is [urgent/necessary/convenient/desirable/advisable] for sb. to do sth.

  have [trouble/a difficult time] [in doing sth./with sth.]

  举例证:It can be given by a (well known/concrete) example that ____________. / In order to see this point clearly, let us to see an example:____________/To illustrate4 this, there is an example that is very persuasive:____________.

  第一点原因:

  The main/first reason is that ____________.

  First, we can observe easily that in modern society, ...

  In the first place

  To begin with, (a good roommate should ____________)

  第二点原因:

  Besides, the further reason why I advocate AAA is that ____________.

  [The second/another] reason for [my/people’s] propensity5 for A is that ____________

  [The second/another] desirable quality for a good roommate is that ____________

  第三点原因:

  Moreover,____________

  The third reason, [not the last/however], goes this way: ____________

  写完三条原因还可以再写:Maybe there are some other reasons( to show____________). But

  it is generally believed that the reasons mentioned above are commonly acceptable.

  最后意犹未尽或者字数不够可以加这么一句:

  Nevertheless I must admit that people can do well without AAA, but no one can ignore the additional convenience and satisfaction offered by AAA. Such experience will definitely be helpful in one’s later life.

  一个使用了模板的例子:

  对立观点:

  In this modern society, people always confront the dilemma6 of choosing whether AAA or BBB. This problem is a much debated one in that it affects everybody in his or her daily life. People may prefer one to the other although some may have no opinions about either at all. Before rendering7 my opinion, I think it is necessary to take a glance at the arguments on both sides.

  It is quite rational for average people to choose BBB because of the obvious reason that 原因.The most extreme manifestation8 of this idea is the fact that 例子.Even so, however, many advantages of BBB over AAA will be obscured by its considerable drawbacks such as 例子.Therefore we have no complete evidence to suggest that BBB is always better than AAA. Moreover, a close scrutiny9 of the potential benefits of choosing AAA would reveal how flimsy it is to stick to the propensity to BBB over AAA.

  There are numerous reasons for my preference for AAA, and I shall here explore only a few of the most important ones. One chief reason is that 原因一.And I can think of no better illustration of the idea than the fact that 例子一. The above is only part of the important aspects, and another one with equal significance with respect to choosing between the two lies in the development of the proposition that 原因二. This well explains the undeniable fact that 例子二. Besides, a further reason why I advocate AAA is that 原因三.This may explain why 例子三.

  Last but not least, there is also a more practical reason why I would choose AAA, that is 原因四.

  All in all, taking into account all these merits that AAA boasts of, we may safely arrive at the conclusion that the advantages of AAA outweigh any benefit we can get from BBB and choosing AAA is a rather wise decision



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1 circumvented a3f20b011bdef60fe4ae8c7a6f37c85d     
v.设法克服或避免(某事物),回避( circumvent的过去式和过去分词 );绕过,绕行,绕道旅行
参考例句:
  • By such means the ban against dancing was circumvented. 这样,舞蹈就不至于被禁止。 来自英汉非文学 - 民俗
  • It can therefore be circumvented by address manipulation and explicit type conversion. 因而可以通过地址操纵和显式型别转换来绕过此保护功能。 来自互联网
2 investigation MRKzq     
n.调查,调查研究
参考例句:
  • In an investigation,a new fact became known, which told against him.在调查中新发现了一件对他不利的事实。
  • He drew the conclusion by building on his own investigation.他根据自己的调查研究作出结论。
3 inadequate 2kzyk     
adj.(for,to)不充足的,不适当的
参考例句:
  • The supply is inadequate to meet the demand.供不应求。
  • She was inadequate to the demands that were made on her.她还无力满足对她提出的各项要求。
4 illustrate IaRxw     
v.举例说明,阐明;图解,加插图
参考例句:
  • The company's bank statements illustrate its success.这家公司的银行报表说明了它的成功。
  • This diagram will illustrate what I mean.这个图表可说明我的意思。
5 propensity mtIyk     
n.倾向;习性
参考例句:
  • He has a propensity for drinking too much alcohol.他有酗酒的倾向。
  • She hasn't reckoned on his propensity for violence.她不曾料到他有暴力倾向。
6 dilemma Vlzzf     
n.困境,进退两难的局面
参考例句:
  • I am on the horns of a dilemma about the matter.这件事使我进退两难。
  • He was thrown into a dilemma.他陷入困境。
7 rendering oV5xD     
n.表现,描写
参考例句:
  • She gave a splendid rendering of Beethoven's piano sonata.她精彩地演奏了贝多芬的钢琴奏鸣曲。
  • His narrative is a super rendering of dialect speech and idiom.他的叙述是方言和土语最成功的运用。
8 manifestation 0RCz6     
n.表现形式;表明;现象
参考例句:
  • Her smile is a manifestation of joy.她的微笑是她快乐的表现。
  • What we call mass is only another manifestation of energy.我们称之为质量的东西只是能量的另一种表现形态。
9 scrutiny ZDgz6     
n.详细检查,仔细观察
参考例句:
  • His work looks all right,but it will not bear scrutiny.他的工作似乎很好,但是经不起仔细检查。
  • Few wives in their forties can weather such a scrutiny.很少年过四十的妻子经得起这么仔细的观察。
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