PETS四级写作经典例题二
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 [经典例题二]
  DIRECTIONS :

  A. Title : GOOD HEALTH

  B. Time limit :40 minutes

  C. Word limit : 120-150 words ( not including the given opening sentence)

  D. Your composition should be based on the OUTLINE below and should start with the

  given opening sentence : "The desire for good health is universal. "

  E. YOur composition should be written neatly1 on the ANSWER SHEET.

  OUTLINE:

  1. Importance of good health

  2. Ways to keep fit

  3. My own practices

  [题型分析]

  提纲式题型是PETS-4级中最常见的作文题型。在提纲作文中,为考生提供好了要点式的写作提纲,将考生的作文范围限定在一定的主题和讨论附近。该类题型要求考生紧扣题目主题,根据提纲提示的思路和要点展开段落。

  提纲式作文相对主题句作文来说更加灵活,这就要求考生有更强的审题本领,能够将题干中所给的提纲信息准确地续写为一整篇文章。但是相对于图表作文和情景作文来说,对审题立意的要求又相对减弱,考生只需要根据给定的提纲进行发挥即可。总的来说,还是考察考生用英文进行论证的本领。

  [范文]

  GOOD HEALTH

  Wherever you are and whatever you do, staying healthy is always important. With the improvement2 of our living standards, people are attaching more and more importance to their health. We students can' t keep the high study efficiency3 without good. health. The same thing is true with workers, scientists and doctors.

  In my opinion, good diet and exercises are two major ways to keep healthy. The food we eat every day must be rational4 and should include meat, vegetables, eggs, and fruit. It is important to drink water every day and not to get addicted5 to drinking coffee or some other soft drinks. Ex-ercising every day is also essential for us to stay healthy. We can ride bicycles, play tennis or swim. Of course we don' t need to exhaust6 ourselves. We should plan our physical exercises according to our actual condition. An hour a day is enough.

  As a university student, I have much free time to do exercises. l usually play badminton and tennis. But sometimes I am lazy and do not exercise for all kinds of excuses, such as cold weather and exams. I must correct it. I am also careful with my diet. In a way, keeping healthy is not very hard, if you just take it seriously.



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1 neatly ynZzBp     
adv.整洁地,干净地,灵巧地,熟练地
参考例句:
  • Sailors know how to wind up a long rope neatly.水手们知道怎样把一条大绳利落地缠好。
  • The child's dress is neatly gathered at the neck.那孩子的衣服在领口处打着整齐的皱褶。
2 improvement 39vxg     
n.改进,增进;改进之处,改善的地方
参考例句:
  • The doctor noticed a gradual improvement in his patient.医生注意到病人在逐渐恢复健康。
  • I can detect signs of improvement in your thinking.我可以察觉出你思考问题方面的进步。
3 efficiency 08dyB     
n.效率,效能,功效
参考例句:
  • We were most impressed with your efficiency.你的效率给我们留下很深刻的印象。
  • Our goal is to achieve the maximum of efficiency.我们的目标是取得最高的效率。
4 rational ZALzc     
adj.合理的,理性的,能推理的;n.有理数
参考例句:
  • It was a rational plan and bound to succeed.这是一个合理的计划,肯定会成功。
  • The reasoning seems rational.这论据似乎是合乎情理的。
5 addicted dzizmY     
adj.沉溺于....的,对...上瘾的
参考例句:
  • He was addicted to heroin at the age of 17.他17岁的时候对海洛因上了瘾。
  • She's become addicted to love stories.她迷上了爱情小说。
6 exhaust jP4zL     
vt.使衰竭,使筋疲力尽;用尽,耗尽,用完
参考例句:
  • The climb will exhaust the boys.爬山会使那些男孩们疲惫不堪的。
  • It will exhaust the nation's oil reserves.它会耗尽国家的石油储备。
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