How to Write Great emails
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How to write application letter?
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All job-hunting correspondence is important, and the application letter to a long-waited job is especially critical. It is your chance to paint a clear but brief picture of your ideal, perfect job. The aim of this topic is to tell you how to make the content of an application letter really readable to the employers and rewarding to you. Now, let’s begin~
1. Preparatory steps.
Employers are cautious about hiring people because companies can't return employees easily who fail on the job. They have to terminate them and start over, both of which are costly1. And so you have to do some preparing job for your writing.
Find out something about the company. Significant data include the size, product or service offered, future plans, and so forth2. Use personal contacts if you know someone who works for the company. You may also call the Personnel Office of the company you are interested in and ask for information. Sometimes this works, and sometimes it doesn't, but it is often worth trying. Know what you want to ask before you call---write out questions if that will help you remember when you're nervous. Base your first questions on the job advertisement, and follow up with more general questions. Keep notes of what you found out, and where you found it.
Now you are in a position to start a draft of the letter. You might begin by making two short lists that answer the following questions:
• What do I have to offer them?
• What do they have to offer me?
Don't be alarmed if all you have to offer is a moderately good grade-point average from a decent university in the right major, and all they have to offer is a reasonable salary ---but try to describe the job that offers you more than that: experience in an area of your field that you are interested in or you just want to work for a company that you already know and respect.
2. How to title.
The writing begins since the preparative things have been well done. It is good if you know the interviewer’s surname and gender4 and if not you may just start the letter this way: “Dear manager…”

3. Information source.
Tell how you get the information, “I learned from the newspaper that …” for example. This will make the letter smooth and natural and also will help the company do its calculating job.

4. Make your application clear.
Here is an example for your reference. “In applying for the position of sales manager I offer my qualifications, which I believe will meet your demanding requirements.”
And also you may include the reason for applying this position. This may contains two reasons, why leave the present employer and why want the new job. If you do explain the first why please remember not to over criticize your former boss.
5. Main statement.
This is the most important part of the letter, and here you will have to persuade the employer to hire you.
Get together the necessary information to make a clear statement on your past life. This includes dates, names and locations of companies you have worked for, organizations you have belonged to, colleges and universities you have attended, special honors or scholarships for academic achievement or merit, and so forth. You may want to include other categories, but if you do, don't call them ``others''---that makes them sound unimportant. You can call the category ``Skills'' or the like.
If no resume is enclosed, you can be as specific and detailed5 as the preceding part. But remember that you needn't tell your whole life story in the letter---the people who read these read many, many of them, and they appreciate people who stick to the point and only write about relevant topics. Unless they relate directly to the job, your hobbies are best left out.
Do organize it in reverse chronological6 order. Educational history goes into reverse chronological order, as well as job history. Afterwards you should edit your letter to make sure that the content fits the job you want and your personal skills and abilities that are relevant to that job. For example, you may have relevant experiences from a previous job that you want to describe in more detail.
If a resume be added to your letter do cut those unrelated abilities, certificates, qualifications and so on. Just try your best to make it brief and clear.
6. Resolution and contemplation.
Tell them you will work hard and try to be a high-efficiency worker. It is an effective way to move the employer and make them decide to use you.
7. Salary.
It is difficult for one to say what compensation one deserves but some employer may request one to do so. If it is a must you have to make wise judgment7 and give the for-you-satisfactory base salary. For example:
(1) While I am serving my apprenticeship8, I should consider 800RMB per month.
(2) I should require a salary of 2,000RMB a month to begin with.
Use gentle words will be better. But do not show too much humility9 and apology kind sentiment, do not ask for their advice and do state a definite salary.
For a newly-graduated student he has to know that it is to his profit to get an ordinary job with great chance for promotion10 than one only with high salary. And there are a lot you may not do well actually for your deficiency of experience, relationship, tact3 and so on. So do not utter an unpractical and fearful number.
8. Ask for an interview.
Remember that in a job letter you are asking for an interview even only a reply, not for a job. Normally no one will hire you sight unseen, on the basis of a letter and résumé.
To make it sure that you receive a reply you’d better provide your living address, postal11 code, email box, phone number and other ways they can conveniently reach you.

There are several examples to follow:
(1) I should appreciate the privilege of a personal interview. I maybe reached by letter at the address given below.
(2) If my application has convinced you of my ability to satisfy you, I should welcome the opportunity to talk with you, so that you may judge my personal qualifications further.
(3) May I have the opportunity to discuss this matter further with you? My telephone is xxxxxxx. You can reach me between xx and xx o‘clock during the day.

9. Say “Thank you”.

Whether or not your application being considered, the reality is that you add trouble to the company and so it is polite for you to say thanks. Thank them for reading your letter and considering the interview with you. Tell them you may call sometime to check whether your letter reached into their hands and the arrangement of the interview. Even they tell you in the phone a not desired result it is better to wait a phone never ring.

10. Attachment12.
It depends on the actual case. If a detailed resume or any materials are requested just enclose it within your letter. But do remember to state it clearly. For example:
(1) Materials Enclosed. Please find a resume, a photo and an autobiography13.
(2) A copy of my transcript14 is enclosed.

PS
Your letter is meant to persuade your prospective15 employer to grant you an interview. These are some rules your letter should conform to:
1. It should be neat.
The letter must be pleasing to the eye---not cramped16 and crowded-looking. It must be easy and quick to read. The simplest solution to the low return rate is careful word-processing. When you've completed this working draft, set it aside for a few hours and do something else---leaving it overnight is best, if possible. The next day, look it over. You will probably find some things you want to change; perhaps you may have thought of things you want to add. Make these changes and additions right on your working draft. When typed, your letter should fit comfortably on one page.
2. It should sound confident, but not arrogant17 or shamefaced.
How do you set a confident tone in your writing? Briefly18, give information about yourself in a brisk, straightforward19 way, without a lot of qualification: that is, do say things like, ``I believe my education and experience suit me for the position,'' but not ``I feel I probably meet the qualifications for the position,'' and not, ``I am the one and only candidate for the job.''

Bear in mind that there is no standard formula about the content of an application letter but a range of problems and possibilities, depending on the job you are applying for and your own background and experience. If really want to get a desired and decent job the first thing you have to do is enrich yourself and only under this condition dare I promise you a promising20 future! Best wishes for you!



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1 costly 7zXxh     
adj.昂贵的,价值高的,豪华的
参考例句:
  • It must be very costly to keep up a house like this.维修这么一幢房子一定很昂贵。
  • This dictionary is very useful,only it is a bit costly.这本词典很有用,左不过贵了些。
2 forth Hzdz2     
adv.向前;向外,往外
参考例句:
  • The wind moved the trees gently back and forth.风吹得树轻轻地来回摇晃。
  • He gave forth a series of works in rapid succession.他很快连续发表了一系列的作品。
3 tact vqgwc     
n.机敏,圆滑,得体
参考例句:
  • She showed great tact in dealing with a tricky situation.她处理棘手的局面表现得十分老练。
  • Tact is a valuable commodity.圆滑老练是很有用处的。
4 gender slSyD     
n.(生理上的)性,(名词、代词等的)性
参考例句:
  • French differs from English in having gender for all nouns.法语不同于英语,所有的名词都有性。
  • Women are sometimes denied opportunities solely because of their gender.妇女有时仅仅因为性别而无法获得种种机会。
5 detailed xuNzms     
adj.详细的,详尽的,极注意细节的,完全的
参考例句:
  • He had made a detailed study of the terrain.他对地形作了缜密的研究。
  • A detailed list of our publications is available on request.我们的出版物有一份详细的目录备索。
6 chronological 8Ofzi     
adj.按年月顺序排列的,年代学的
参考例句:
  • The paintings are exhibited in chronological sequence.这些画是按创作的时间顺序展出的。
  • Give me the dates in chronological order.把日期按年月顺序给我。
7 judgment e3xxC     
n.审判;判断力,识别力,看法,意见
参考例句:
  • The chairman flatters himself on his judgment of people.主席自认为他审视人比别人高明。
  • He's a man of excellent judgment.他眼力过人。
8 apprenticeship 4NLyv     
n.学徒身份;学徒期
参考例句:
  • She was in the second year of her apprenticeship as a carpenter. 她当木工学徒已是第二年了。
  • He served his apprenticeship with Bob. 他跟鲍勃当学徒。
9 humility 8d6zX     
n.谦逊,谦恭
参考例句:
  • Humility often gains more than pride.谦逊往往比骄傲收益更多。
  • His voice was still soft and filled with specious humility.他的声音还是那么温和,甚至有点谦卑。
10 promotion eRLxn     
n.提升,晋级;促销,宣传
参考例句:
  • The teacher conferred with the principal about Dick's promotion.教师与校长商谈了迪克的升级问题。
  • The clerk was given a promotion and an increase in salary.那个职员升了级,加了薪。
11 postal EP0xt     
adj.邮政的,邮局的
参考例句:
  • A postal network now covers the whole country.邮路遍及全国。
  • Remember to use postal code.勿忘使用邮政编码。
12 attachment POpy1     
n.附属物,附件;依恋;依附
参考例句:
  • She has a great attachment to her sister.她十分依恋她的姐姐。
  • She's on attachment to the Ministry of Defense.她现在隶属于国防部。
13 autobiography ZOOyX     
n.自传
参考例句:
  • He published his autobiography last autumn.他去年秋天出版了自己的自传。
  • His life story is recounted in two fascinating volumes of autobiography.这两卷引人入胜的自传小说详述了他的生平。
14 transcript JgpzUp     
n.抄本,誊本,副本,肄业证书
参考例句:
  • A transcript of the tapes was presented as evidence in court.一份录音带的文字本作为证据被呈交法庭。
  • They wouldn't let me have a transcript of the interview.他们拒绝给我一份采访的文字整理稿。
15 prospective oR7xB     
adj.预期的,未来的,前瞻性的
参考例句:
  • The story should act as a warning to other prospective buyers.这篇报道应该对其他潜在的购买者起到警示作用。
  • They have all these great activities for prospective freshmen.这会举办各种各样的活动来招待未来的新人。
16 cramped 287c2bb79385d19c466ec2df5b5ce970     
a.狭窄的
参考例句:
  • The house was terribly small and cramped, but the agent described it as a bijou residence. 房子十分狭小拥挤,但经纪人却把它说成是小巧别致的住宅。
  • working in cramped conditions 在拥挤的环境里工作
17 arrogant Jvwz5     
adj.傲慢的,自大的
参考例句:
  • You've got to get rid of your arrogant ways.你这骄傲劲儿得好好改改。
  • People are waking up that he is arrogant.人们开始认识到他很傲慢。
18 briefly 9Styo     
adv.简单地,简短地
参考例句:
  • I want to touch briefly on another aspect of the problem.我想简单地谈一下这个问题的另一方面。
  • He was kidnapped and briefly detained by a terrorist group.他被一个恐怖组织绑架并短暂拘禁。
19 straightforward fFfyA     
adj.正直的,坦率的;易懂的,简单的
参考例句:
  • A straightforward talk is better than a flowery speech.巧言不如直说。
  • I must insist on your giving me a straightforward answer.我一定要你给我一个直截了当的回答。
20 promising BkQzsk     
adj.有希望的,有前途的
参考例句:
  • The results of the experiments are very promising.实验的结果充满了希望。
  • We're trying to bring along one or two promising young swimmers.我们正设法培养出一两名有前途的年轻游泳选手。
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