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有效的句子要有重点,并且要突出重点。句子的重点可以通过下列方法,加以突出: 1. 把重点摆在句首或句尾. 一般而论,最显眼的位置是在“句尾,其次是在句首,中间的位置最平淡,乏善可陈。例如: (1).Incorrect grammar and improper1 construction invariably distract readers' attention. 2. 在复杂句里,把主句放在从句之后.除了名词从句和形容词从句之外,因为它们位置较固定,副词从句中有几种的位置灵活,可以在主句之前出现,也可以跟在主句之后。通常我们就把这样的副词从句提前,重点则放在后头的主句,如(3b): (3a) I came upon an old classmate when I went to town yesterday. 副词短语更是如此,如 (4b): (4a) Steel is commonly used to make knives, razors and other useful tools because of its durability2. 3. 把较重要或有分量的词语放在后头,如(5b)和(6b): (5a) I was delighted and amused by the classical opera 4. 把句子中一系列的项目作逻辑性的排列。例如: (7) Tony ate his dinner, watched TV, and then went to bed. 5. 必要时,重复重要的语词或概念。 例如: (9) Jackie enjoys the company of ladies. He likes their beauty, he likes their delicacy4, he likes their vivacity5, and he likes their silence. 6. 尽量用主动说态,因此(11b)比(11a)好: (11a) A pedestrian was struck on the head by a flying stone. 7. 适当时候,可用倒装句和平行句,如: (12) Seven dwarfs6 lived here in the center of the dark forest. → 点击收听单词发音
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