GMAT考试写作指导:Issue写作范文五三
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53. If one focuses on systems such as financial services and telecommunications, where
emerging technologies have the greatest impact, one sees increasing user-friendliness.
However, in other systems—public and private alike—inefficiencies, roadblocks, and
other "unfriendly" features still abound1. One such example is the U.S. health-care
delivery system.
      To a large extent, the user-unfriendly nature of health-care delivery stems from its
close tie to the insurance industry. Service providers and suppliers inflate2 prices,
knowing that insurance companies can well afford to pay by passing on inflated3 costs to
the insured. Hospital patients are often discharged prematurely4 merely because
insurance fails to cover in-patient care beyond a certain amount or duration. In the
extreme, patients are sometimes falsely informed that they are well or cured, just so that
the facility can make room for insured patients. Insurance providers reject claims and
coverage5 intentionally6 and in bad faith when the insured has suffered or is statistically7
likely to suffer from a terminal or other long-term and costly—illness. Insurance
companies also impose extreme coverage exceptions for pre-existing conditions. Both
tactics are designed, of course, to maximize insurance company profits at the expense of
the system's user. Finally, new medical technologies that provide more effective
diagnosis8 and treatment are often accessible only to the select few who can afford the
most comprehensive insurance coverage.
      The consequences of these user-unfriendly features can be grave indeed for the
individual, since this system relates directly to a person's physical well-being9 and very
life. For example, when a claim or coverage is wrongfully denied, lacking financial
resources to enforce their rights, an individual customer has little practical recourse. The
end result is to render health care inaccessible10 to the very individuals who need it most.
These user-unfriendly features can be deleterious on a societal scale as well. An
unhealthy populace is an unproductive one. Also, increased health-care costs place an
undue11 burden on bread-winning adults who feel the squeeze of caring for aging parents
and for children. Finally, these features foster a pervasive12 distrust of government, big
business, and bureaucracy.
      In sum, today's "point-and-click" paradigm13 inaccurately14 portrays15 the actual
functionality of many systems, including our health-care delivery system, which is well-
entrenched in self-interest and insensitivity to the needs of its users.


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1 abound wykz4     
vi.大量存在;(in,with)充满,富于
参考例句:
  • Oranges abound here all the year round.这里一年到头都有很多橙子。
  • But problems abound in the management of State-owned companies.但是在国有企业的管理中仍然存在不少问题。
2 inflate zbGz8     
vt.使膨胀,使骄傲,抬高(物价)
参考例句:
  • The buyers bid against each other and often inflate the prices they pay.买主们竞相投标,往往人为地提高价钱。
  • Stuart jumped into the sea and inflated the liferaft.斯图尔特跳到海里给救生艇充气。
3 inflated Mqwz2K     
adj.(价格)飞涨的;(通货)膨胀的;言过其实的;充了气的v.使充气(于轮胎、气球等)( inflate的过去式和过去分词 );(使)膨胀;(使)通货膨胀;物价上涨
参考例句:
  • He has an inflated sense of his own importance. 他自视过高。
  • They all seem to take an inflated view of their collective identity. 他们对自己的集体身份似乎都持有一种夸大的看法。 来自《简明英汉词典》
4 prematurely nlMzW4     
adv.过早地,贸然地
参考例句:
  • She was born prematurely with poorly developed lungs. 她早产,肺部未发育健全。 来自《简明英汉词典》
  • His hair was prematurely white, but his busy eyebrows were still jet-black. 他的头发已经白了,不过两道浓眉还是乌黑乌黑的。 来自辞典例句
5 coverage nvwz7v     
n.报导,保险范围,保险额,范围,覆盖
参考例句:
  • There's little coverage of foreign news in the newspaper.报纸上几乎没有国外新闻报道。
  • This is an insurance policy with extensive coverage.这是一项承保范围广泛的保险。
6 intentionally 7qOzFn     
ad.故意地,有意地
参考例句:
  • I didn't say it intentionally. 我是无心说的。
  • The local authority ruled that he had made himself intentionally homeless and was therefore not entitled to be rehoused. 当地政府裁定他是有意居无定所,因此没有资格再获得提供住房。
7 statistically Yuxwa     
ad.根据统计数据来看,从统计学的观点来看
参考例句:
  • The sample of building permits is larger and therefore, statistically satisfying. 建筑许可数的样本比较大,所以统计数据更令人满意。
  • The results of each test would have to be statistically independent. 每次试验的结果在统计上必须是独立的。
8 diagnosis GvPxC     
n.诊断,诊断结果,调查分析,判断
参考例句:
  • His symptoms gave no obvious pointer to a possible diagnosis.他的症状无法作出明确的诊断。
  • The engineer made a complete diagnosis of the bridge's collapse.工程师对桥的倒塌做一次彻底的调查分析。
9 well-being Fe3zbn     
n.安康,安乐,幸福
参考例句:
  • He always has the well-being of the masses at heart.他总是把群众的疾苦挂在心上。
  • My concern for their well-being was misunderstood as interference.我关心他们的幸福,却被误解为多管闲事。
10 inaccessible 49Nx8     
adj.达不到的,难接近的
参考例句:
  • This novel seems to me among the most inaccessible.这本书对我来说是最难懂的小说之一。
  • The top of Mount Everest is the most inaccessible place in the world.珠穆朗玛峰是世界上最难到达的地方。
11 undue Vf8z6V     
adj.过分的;不适当的;未到期的
参考例句:
  • Don't treat the matter with undue haste.不要过急地处理此事。
  • It would be wise not to give undue importance to his criticisms.最好不要过分看重他的批评。
12 pervasive T3zzH     
adj.普遍的;遍布的,(到处)弥漫的;渗透性的
参考例句:
  • It is the most pervasive compound on earth.它是地球上最普遍的化合物。
  • The adverse health effects of car exhaust are pervasive and difficult to measure.汽车尾气对人类健康所构成的有害影响是普遍的,并且难以估算。
13 paradigm c48zJ     
n.例子,模范,词形变化表
参考例句:
  • He had become the paradigm of the successful man. 他已经成为成功人士的典范。
  • Moreover,the results of this research can be the new learning paradigm for digital design studios.除此之外,本研究的研究成果也可以为数位设计课程建立一个新的学习范例。
14 inaccurately a8227b8b26c38df3fcbc98367e352369     
不精密地,不准确地
参考例句:
  • The money mechanism began to work stiffly and inaccurately. 贷币机构开始周转不灵和不准确了。
  • Court records reveal every day how inaccurately "eyewitnesses'see. 法庭记录每天都显露出“见证人”看得多不准确。
15 portrays e91d23abfcd9e0ee71757456ac840010     
v.画像( portray的第三人称单数 );描述;描绘;描画
参考例句:
  • The museum collection vividly portrays the heritage of 200 years of canals. 博物馆的藏品让运河200 年的历史再现眼前。 来自《简明英汉词典》
  • The film portrays Gandhi as a kind of superman. 这部电影把甘地描绘成一个超人。 来自《简明英汉词典》
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