雅思写作高分指南:例题详解开头多样化句式
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雅思写作的评分标准变为:TR,CC,GRA和LR后,评分标准细化,具体化,从而对英语语言基本功的考查力度加大。 笔者现将在课堂上讲的多样化句式的一部分内容拿出来跟读者共享。

  句子开头的变化的手段:

  A Begin sentence with an appositive

  The forest ranger1, an expert in forest fire control, talked to the campers about safety in the woods.

  An expert in forest fire control, the forest ranger talked to the campers about safety in the woods.

  the country’s biggest cellular2 operator, China Mobile is looking at tighter controls on Internet-related service providers, industry insiders say.

  B Begin a sentence with an adverb

  The fog was slowly settling down.

  Slowly the fog was settling down.

  Obviously enough, he himself can not handle the trouble by himself.

  C Begin a sentence with an adjective or adjective phrase

  Mr Boyd was very angry and began to defend his reputation with strong arguments.

  Angry, Mr Boyd began to defend his reputation with strong argument.

  Tired and frustrated3, the teacher went home to have a rest.

  D Begin sentences with participle phrases

  I jogged very day and increased my energy level.

  Jogging every day, I soon increased my energy level.

  Tim was troubled by a dream and he woke up with a start.

  Troubled by a dream, Tim woke up with a start.

  Witnessed by Chinese Premier4 Wen Jiabao and leaders of the 10-mem ber ASEAN, Chinese Minister of Commerce Bo Xilai signed the agreement with 10 economic ministers of the ASEAN countries.

  E Begin sentences with an infinitive5 phrase

  You must attend every class to succeed in a course.

  To succeed in a course, you must attend every class.

  F Begin sentences with a prepositional phrase

  Madame Curie was an industrious6 worker in the scientific laboratory.

  In the scientific laboratory, Madame Curie was an industrious worker.

  Under a new scheme, established SPs can become pure content providers and China Mobile may seek a bigger portion of the shared revenues.

  In the short term, operators will not abandon SPs.

  For China Mobile, a dramatic change in its partnership7 scheme may be harmful.

  G Begin sentences with clause modifiers

  He did not want to rewrite the paper because he was tired and hungry and discouraged.

  Because he was tired and hungry and discouraged, he did not want to rewrite the paper.

  You may regret in leisure what you impulsively8 do in haste.

  What you impulsively do in haste you may regret in leisure.



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1 ranger RTvxb     
n.国家公园管理员,护林员;骑兵巡逻队员
参考例句:
  • He was the head ranger of the national park.他曾是国家公园的首席看守员。
  • He loved working as a ranger.他喜欢做护林人。
2 cellular aU1yo     
adj.移动的;细胞的,由细胞组成的
参考例句:
  • She has a cellular telephone in her car.她的汽车里有一部无线通讯电话机。
  • Many people use cellular materials as sensitive elements in hygrometers.很多人用蜂窝状的材料作为测量温度的传感元件。
3 frustrated ksWz5t     
adj.挫败的,失意的,泄气的v.使不成功( frustrate的过去式和过去分词 );挫败;使受挫折;令人沮丧
参考例句:
  • It's very easy to get frustrated in this job. 这个工作很容易令人懊恼。
  • The bad weather frustrated all our hopes of going out. 恶劣的天气破坏了我们出行的愿望。 来自《简明英汉词典》
4 premier R19z3     
adj.首要的;n.总理,首相
参考例句:
  • The Irish Premier is paying an official visit to Britain.爱尔兰总理正在对英国进行正式访问。
  • He requested that the premier grant him an internview.他要求那位总理接见他一次。
5 infinitive EqJz2f     
n.不定词;adj.不定词的
参考例句:
  • The use of the split infinitive is now generally acceptable.分裂不定式的用法现在已被广泛接受。
  • Modal verbs generally take the bare infinitive.情态动词通常用不带to的不定式。
6 industrious a7Axr     
adj.勤劳的,刻苦的,奋发的
参考例句:
  • If the tiller is industrious,the farmland is productive.人勤地不懒。
  • She was an industrious and willing worker.她是个勤劳肯干的员工。
7 partnership NmfzPy     
n.合作关系,伙伴关系
参考例句:
  • The company has gone into partnership with Swiss Bank Corporation.这家公司已经和瑞士银行公司建立合作关系。
  • Martin has taken him into general partnership in his company.马丁已让他成为公司的普通合伙人。
8 impulsively 0596bdde6dedf8c46a693e7e1da5984c     
adv.冲动地
参考例句:
  • She leant forward and kissed him impulsively. 她倾身向前,感情冲动地吻了他。
  • Every good, true, vigorous feeling I had gathered came impulsively round him. 我的一切良好、真诚而又强烈的感情都紧紧围绕着他涌现出来。
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